Please analyze the following writing sample and identify elements that violate grammatical rules of English (e.g., adverb placement, subject-verb agreement, word order, lexical choices).  Rewrite this sample using Standard American English.

"Dr. Sotillo, this is my perception about the movie seen in the last class.

The Lathe Of Haven


The I could understand about the movie is that our life is a reflect of our 
thinking, emotions and behaviors as well as in the first therapy that George 
Orr had, he shown a small picture with not too many colors and with a 
regular picture size, but when he come back to the nest therapies the 
pictures become in a big windows and great variety of colors, sowing your 
vision about life each time more wide.

Even though, the history was a little bit confuse for my English skills, I 
could see too that our life we could absorb the others behavior and to come 
to assume the others roll in certain circumstances. Is the case of the 
therapeutic of the movie (Dr. Harber’s) who was too interfere in the 
patience roll and wanted by himself to make part of the life of his 
patience.

In conclusion we have to be careful with our apretiation about each other, 
because when we are thinking that the life each other are unreal, could be 
our life go in the wrong way or could be more unreal than we could imaging."